Phelio_n_Craze
im sorry , but the first chapters are the most important once.. and this was not good at all honestly i vould rate it a 2/10 with everything piled up togheter ... the way he thinks the way he acts the way everything explained .. im just a big " ? " i wont even bother reading further if the author cant start the chapter off good enough then " imo" its not worth the time to read further , but i hope your story will be going smooth for ya !
This first chapter was poorly done. 1. The MC is not great, not even average good. He acted what the equivalent of being shot at, stopping to ask for the time. 2. The lack of explanation on how he got his powers was not done well, see comments. It might be explained later, so this sense should be later as well.