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Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach DxD

Na1gel
Na1gelLv4Na1gel

im sorry , but the first chapters are the most important once.. and this was not good at all honestly i vould rate it a 2/10 with everything piled up togheter ... the way he thinks the way he acts the way everything explained .. im just a big " ? " i wont even bother reading further if the author cant start the chapter off good enough then " imo" its not worth the time to read further , but i hope your story will be going smooth for ya !

Phelio_n_Craze
Phelio_n_CrazeAuthorPhelio_n_Craze

It's doing well as many people still like it. Thank you though. hope you find something worth your time out there.

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ImpishWolf
ImpishWolfLv3ImpishWolf

not a good first chapter

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

This first chapter was poorly done. 1. The MC is not great, not even average good. He acted what the equivalent of being shot at, stopping to ask for the time. 2. The lack of explanation on how he got his powers was not done well, see comments. It might be explained later, so this sense should be later as well.

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

This is reincarnation story, so MC must have watched and read Bleach series, that would explain how can he use Shinigami Technics, plus he is young Adult soul who was put into body of the baby who is a hybrid of three races.

Dagen
DagenLv15Dagen

TFTC…

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5Helios_Sol

no devil slave mc please i so tell ill drop before reading to much

Ash_Ketchum_6164
Ash_Ketchum_6164Lv14Ash_Ketchum_6164

Thank you for the chapter.

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Could use tags.

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

hmmm

MestBeenAWind
MestBeenAWindLv4MestBeenAWind

Thanks for the chapter

BLITZ2
BLITZ2Lv1BLITZ2

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the Chapter

Darenone
DarenoneLv3Darenone

poco contexto

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

no harem tag. no tags at all.

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE