Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach DxD
Bleach DxD
Phelio_n_Craze
Chapter comments22
This is reincarnation story, so MC must have watched and read Bleach series, that would explain how can he use Shinigami Technics, plus he is young Adult soul who was put into body of the baby who is a hybrid of three races.
This first chapter was poorly done. 1. The MC is not great, not even average good. He acted what the equivalent of being shot at, stopping to ask for the time. 2. The lack of explanation on how he got his powers was not done well, see comments. It might be explained later, so this sense should be later as well.
im sorry , but the first chapters are the most important once.. and this was not good at all honestly i vould rate it a 2/10 with everything piled up togheter ... the way he thinks the way he acts the way everything explained .. im just a big " ? " i wont even bother reading further if the author cant start the chapter off good enough then " imo" its not worth the time to read further , but i hope your story will be going smooth for ya !
