Story_Teller_229
it’s great all positive no negatives ,faster chap ters 👍
Hope the Mc creates his own faction/organisation rather than joining anyone especially not joining that mind rapist Xaiver
ps in marvel there is a character who uses gravity, he can destroy bodies badly, fly, creates piles of metal... GRAVITON I hope that you will not get stuck in one piece and that the hero will exploit his skills well properly.
please creat little harem storm, mystique + 1? (not jean because she die)
1)si 4)no 5)no
1. Yes, so far 2. Yes 3. Yes, the conversation feels bland 4. No 5. Not bored
The convos are full of exposition.
Thxs for the chap
I thank you for the chapter.
1. YES 2. Can't say because story just started 3. NO and there i less monologue that part i liked it 4. nothing like that 5. NO
Thanks for chapter
Thank you for the chapter
Tq for the chapter
1.Yes 2.Yes 3.No 4.Yes 5.Yes
Eu gosto dessa fanfic tá com um bom material, o MC também e bem trabalhado continue com ela
Nice
thanks for the chap