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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Shazam Mutant

akrishnani
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please update

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AtreusGodOfWar
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Did he have his suit (the one on the cover) or was he in hooded jeans and sneakers?

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I_dont_believe_it
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Can he make a supersuit from living lighting like in DC?

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Taste_The_Rainbow_8941
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hey bro, you need an editor? if so, I can help yah. I'm really interested in this book, but I'm seeing some missing letters and so on, so I'm willing to lend a hand.

ErozothDraeor
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Really, the details in this chapter were somewhat disappointing, took me 2 minutes research. He would need to be Mach 8.5 to reach from LA to middle east in 1 hour. Shazam can fly at the speed of light, that is MACH 874,030....... Even if you consider that speed to be his top, ever, in some super powered up version of him, imagining the normal version at.... Mach 10,000, is not a stretch. Please, if you go some super OP power like Shazam, go all the way. It is possible to write the MC as OP and not ruin the story, all you need to do is have him not show off. "Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)" Is a good example. You can also fix it by adding more details, imagine the MC saying "I don't want to let people know I am so fast I can basically teleport to the other side of the planet, in case I ever need it, so I will keep my speed down and take one hour to reach it". Regardless, your mach 5 and 1 hour don't add up, even with rough math. This story could be great, if you pay attention to details.

Vishal_Jagnayak_3739
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Master_bastard
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thank you for the chapter

Trucksama
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thanks for the chapter

Moon_man_Zay
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Sucks this hasn’t been updated in a while 😞

thecamilon
thecamilonLv2thecamilon

Esta historia la volveran a actualizar?

PhantomNite629
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thx for the chap

Anthony_Nguyen_0554
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Where's the new chapters?

Daoofholes6969
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update?

GigaThunder660
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Hyuga_Tobirama
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This story has potential

Rochirush
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Thanks for the good chapter 👍👍👍

ErozothDraeor
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The ten rings got Tony to build them the new missile, so they didnt have it before, at least in MCU.

Username48399
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Thanks for the chapter

TruthAlfa
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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻