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Comments of chapter undefined of The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals

Ashbron_
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bro story is going in more predictable way and i can guess what will happen.and your Concept is good, and may be one of the best I have ever read but your over praising and too predictable story line is making it sloppy and boring.and if there's too many female around mc it will feel boring and non-existing. like if you introduce a female character we will know she is on of mcs.

DaoistXw4ft3
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Bro PLZ make these chapters longer this book so good but feel like im getting scammed with the short chapters