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Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

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Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

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Mura3
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but if you insist, for event that had already happen, consider putting a timestamp on it or some indication that you're talking about the past, before resuming on the present, so as not to confuse the reader.

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Mura3
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secondly, i think mc divine punishment should be enough, and no further punishment is necessary. from fat to lean, to handsome to charred, then slow recovery. these should be a good development, and it was better if u use this moment to further his character and throw his naivety

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good chapitre

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Robloxian
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Thank you for the chapter :)

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IndominsRexx
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tftc~welp, some viewers just wait for the actual plot to start, like when the villain and the protagonist meet etc.Gambare...welp not me, if i find something interesting, imma read it all the way, even if its the filler or slice of life parts..

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Nightfall
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thanks for the chapter!

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