ElectricLuna
The system is too limiting. And can you remove the death function? It makes me feel uneasy that the system can kill him just because he killed a few more ants. What if he steps on an ant hill during a battle? The pain from the penalty might not kill him but the predator sure will.
Apocalyptic_Nimbus:Do you still earn if I use fast passes on your novel? Cuz I'm ready to spend all my fps on you. If not then I'll use coins (and hope my mom won't find out). I like these kind of story after all.
The synopsis sounded great.Unfortunately it doesn't match with the actual story.The synopsis implied that he gained memories that guide him subconsciously / he gains enlightenment.But in actuality he gained a females memories, is spoon fed everything through a system and is extremly limited because he suffered a severe backlash due to killing a mere 40 ants. Pathetic. The system sucks.