Comments of chapter undefined of Focused Fire (ATLA)

It was a beautiful journey, i hope i will see you again in another FF

Thanks for the chapter author. This has been an amazing journey. I wonder what you'll write next though you definitely deserve a break first. On a side note, I wonder how many are still here after the "initial draft" haha.

see you in another story 😆

Thank you i had a nice time reading all of this novel. To be honest i didnt know it was already finished but im glad i get to finish at least one of the one i liked.Great job author.

that was a neat story glad it made it to the end unlike most stories ive seen lately lol

Thank you so much I really enjoyed this journey, and I hope to see you once again

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Thank you for the wonderful journey author. Will there be an after story for this?

absolutely brilliant story. I loved every second of it. thank you for bringing so much joy into my life.

Thanks for the chapter and story so far bud. Is this the end or will there be some more chapters to wrap this up, personally I’d like to see how this would continue and change things like will Korra still be the avatar or things like that. I mean will Republic City still be a thing considering how things ended?

Thanks for the chapter. Any new plans?

So sad that it’s over but so grateful that it happened. This was the best Avatar fan fic I’ve had the privilege to read so thank you. Doesn’t matter what your next book will be because I will be reading it.

This was fantastic, wonderful story!!

Thank you very much for this beautiful story, it was one of the best, it's a shame it's over

I enjoyed it immensely just wonder if there will be a epilogue