Divinedream
I saw this idea on another GOT story but do you know the game "For Honor" and the heroes who compose it could you lead them to be future soldiers of the MC? Then I find that the chapters are short but it's up to you to see it always remains good. Can you expand the dialogues a little more and show the relationships in more detail or even add dialogues it will improve your story I think and increase the writing of a chapter. I think your story is good for now but it can improve so keep going and thank you for the story.