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It's interesting I don't hate it has potential yielding eye which critique at this moment would be his relationship with Karama and the fact karma is women now I also don't care for gender bent characters from the original but I will wait to pass judgment on that until I get further along. I wish Naruto and Karama's relationship was more friendly than what you have. closer to the real thing. They should be partners friends brothers. But so far it is too soon to make any real judgment calls