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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: My Harem Academia

timepiece94
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It's interesting I don't hate it has potential yielding eye which critique at this moment would be his relationship with Karama and the fact karma is women now I also don't care for gender bent characters from the original but I will wait to pass judgment on that until I get further along. I wish Naruto and Karama's relationship was more friendly than what you have. closer to the real thing. They should be partners friends brothers. But so far it is too soon to make any real judgment calls

1Dreamer_Owl
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Thanks for the chapter 😎👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Carlos_Henrique_4295
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yes, you must continue. I'm enjoying the fanfic so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Zenon00125
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hehe

SCP_UnKnown
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Hyrka_Sz
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it's a cool start for the story

Angellis95
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I don't see any problem with it yet if you enjoy writing it then do so if you don't. then find something else to write. so far so good though

TheLittleGirl
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Reading

Gringee
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It’s a good one, interested in the development n back story. How did he get here bla blah blah

DarkestCalling
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feels kinda overly angsty at the moment