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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Grand Magus {A Gilderoy Lockhart SI}

HappyKing
HappyKingLv4HappyKing

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

mehemeh
mehemehLv1mehemeh

im gonna wait this one out but from here on out imma throw some stone

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Not a great first chapter. It has a lot of unneeded information, literally info dump on a world he will never see. The grammar could use some polish but its okay.

D_eta015
D_eta015Lv4D_eta015

I have read the Skillful Lockhart and HP: Reborn as Lockhart. So yeah, not very much nor any that was long lasting.

_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv10_Solomon_

yeah ngl, I've read two fics with Gil as the mc.. one is the will of Gil on WB and the other was some Chinese one on qidian

Zavier_Ryan
Zavier_RyanLv14Zavier_Ryan

It’s rare to see a Lockheart HP fanfic