I think you should make it so the system is not like be4 where it was connected to somebody using him to eventually steal his cultivation and just be a regular affection system that only has to help him with no ulterior motives.
i hope this rewrite will be good. and not messed up.
i think u should read comment and take em into slight considerations.. BUT OFC follow ur own plot..
Cant wait master's reaction
I like this story but I feel like things got a little too chaotic too quickly with no explanation. Hopefully, you feel better writing it this time around.
This i vibrate with a lot more Author! its more interesting than what we had before though i did love the steamy scenes but i am truly here for the story of Yan Shun and how he become god emperor of mankind.