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Comments of chapter undefined of My Beautiful Master Is A Yandere

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S_A_N2610
S_A_N2610Lv14S_A_N2610

I think you should make it so the system is not like be4 where it was connected to somebody using him to eventually steal his cultivation and just be a regular affection system that only has to help him with no ulterior motives.

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DaoistTgtwm9
DaoistTgtwm9Lv4DaoistTgtwm9

I don't know man, felt fresh seeing a yandere system

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GenYase
GenYaseLv5GenYase

I mean it sounds indeed more interesting rn. Hope i won't bevas confused as before.

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ZeroTheF0olish_
ZeroTheF0olish_Lv4ZeroTheF0olish_

let's hope it goes better this time around tftc author

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Unknownuserleft
UnknownuserleftLv13Unknownuserleft

i hope this rewrite will be good. and not messed up. i think u should read comment and take em into slight considerations.. BUT OFC follow ur own plot.. Cant wait master's reaction

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Dragon_Blast_6960
Dragon_Blast_6960Lv4Dragon_Blast_6960

oh nice starting from here rewind I like it

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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv13skulputulurubug

you were rushing previously a slow burn pace suits a cultivation novel better even if MC powers up fast

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ImamKvothe
ImamKvotheLv3ImamKvothe

I want to see girls suffer, especially the youngest.

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Isekai21
Isekai21Lv13Isekai21

what happened?? re-write??? I was confused for a moment. TFTC

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ilike69jokes
ilike69jokesLv3ilike69jokes

this feels much better than before it's like you actually have a plan this time

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Ronin46
Ronin46Lv4Ronin46

Well it started well now we only gotta wait for the chapters and see where it goes but this is a interesting starting 👍

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Sad_Dog_6996
Sad_Dog_6996Lv3Sad_Dog_6996

I like this story but I feel like things got a little too chaotic too quickly with no explanation. Hopefully, you feel better writing it this time around.

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Lyson
LysonLv4Lyson

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Pop_boom
Pop_boomLv4Pop_boom

That's much better

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Alex_Mikoto
Alex_MikotoLv1Alex_Mikoto

Bro just used King Crimson

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BanTheKitten
BanTheKittenLv13BanTheKitten

This i vibrate with a lot more Author! its more interesting than what we had before though i did love the steamy scenes but i am truly here for the story of Yan Shun and how he become god emperor of mankind.

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ImamKvothe
ImamKvotheLv3ImamKvothe

moreeeeeeeeee

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Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv12Eternal_Shu

more more!!!

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Rock_Drake
Rock_DrakeLv4Rock_Drake

Ty for the chapter, I’ll read no matter what

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Seven_slayer
Seven_slayerLv14Seven_slayer

Thanks for the chapter 👍

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SinX_Five
SinX_FiveLv4SinX_Five

Thanks for the chapter