Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: The New Peter Parker

Marvel: The New Peter Parker

Hisoka999

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Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

Crackfic, the general idea is good but it's very rushed and it seems like it's going to be one of those stories where the MC keeps solving everyone's problems, of course him killing killgrave was cool, but the saving Tony thing seems like a waste of time, the whole thing Making a company is also very repetitive, other negative points.

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GoldenZega606Lv1GoldenZega606

Good story with potential, I hope you change the label from villain to antihero, it would suit him better, good luck, if he can save MJ that's fine and if not too, Jesica, Gwen, excellent if you can go for Wanda and Felicia hardy, better.

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Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

Thank you for the chapter

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KartgoLv11Kartgo

Thanks for the chapters more chapters pls

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SolgalaoLv14Solgalao

Thanks for the chapter.

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Daoist96s1k6Lv2Daoist96s1k6

Thanks for the chapter

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4bdu1Lv44bdu1

thnkx for the chapter

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ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Grammar seems to take a hit when characters speak. Liz being this evil is.... I don't get why its part of the plot but whatever. I do think things came to the MC far far to quick with the AI doing everything, kind makes me ask, what now? I mean, he has the power, even though you didn't say which superman, he has money..... story is over? Sure, there are a lot of enemies but that is similar, they win. Maybe the MC will kill more. Does he have super glasses?

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