Ye Fei Ye
The male lead is repugnant. Youāve shown him to be a dislikeable character that is using his power to sexually harrass the fl. He also just sexually assaulted her. This is a criminal offense. There is absolutely no justification for how he treated his childhood friend. His male friends fear him? He treats women at a club like objects? Iāve never hated a character or felt them so irredeamable until this ML. If this was your aim, kudos. Iāll read a bit more but ml is so off-putting, I may drop this story.
what a pig he is! she needs to run away and tell her father like no he s not someone who I should be with. and her farther is messed up and clearly doesn't want anything to do with him and her father like here she is again even tho you took her virginity and left her hanging for 3 year my dad you have beaten him lol. but great work so far I like this book