Hylp
Well, you could say that, but I mostly meant in general more description would be better for a novel. But your novel already is leagues above others. But if you want to improve it, more description would be better or let your writing grow as you write, since you have just started it and this is your first novel. Don’t pressure yourself. I think your writing right now is very good.
Hylp:About the description of the place? I will start working on it!
Good as always but .... Moooore chapters!!!!In my opinion showing the depth and explanation of the story is more important than just some action. becouse its important for the reader to first understand and feel the characters or the story as a whole. And you can always mix some actions during this part.