Comments of chapter undefined of The Titan of Tarth (ASOAIF/GOT) - SI/OC

i understand you wanna make your story more complex and maybe more interesting but to tell you the truth i think this chapter was bad one,especially when you use powers outside of the lore and original story there was no reason for the whole sister secrets and random powers especially when the story is to a early state anyways

Great chapter, keep up the good work

Frankly, this sister with powers is a stupid plot line and Mc's sister is stupid herself.

I hope galladon becomes brighter than rhaegar.

How will scale mc aesthetics ?/10 ? with some references

HxH Nen?

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Author can u answer my question in the previous chapter comments section

Hope everything is ok and you continue this story. A great start so far.

Thanks for chapter

are you gonna continue this? j found it but i really like it so far

Interesting story

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the good chapter