PathLiar
i understand you wanna make your story more complex and maybe more interesting but to tell you the truth i think this chapter was bad one,especially when you use powers outside of the lore and original story there was no reason for the whole sister secrets and random powers especially when the story is to a early state anyways
As to why I wrote it? I honestly just thought it was cool, and that helps in making myself more interested in my own story. And hey, I get it, a lot of people might not like a specific idea or plot point that I put into the story, but there's thousands of other stories out there that fit the bill into what they want. Then there's the books themselves, which I can't recommend highly enough. All I can do is write what brings me joy, and readers should do the same and read what brings them joy. That way = win/win.