Comments of chapter undefined of Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Ink_Weaver122
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hah.... why was MC so lacking in preparation when facing Evelyn, it must have been some kind of feeling Lucas had before towards Evelyn that MC wasn't aware of. that's why MCs are so hesitant, yes, it's just some clichés that are used to it, it's ok, no problem
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Ink_Weaver122:Well I want to create some tension between them and when Lucas receives a memory of old Lucas he also receives some of his emotions, Evelyn knows him but he does not have any memory of her that is why he is so hesitant.
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