Luxuriant
Does the mc have a normal lifespan as he may avoid dating her considering her race lives for far longer than human. And I quite enjoyed the pace of the battle the only time you need to do longer battles is in important story defining oneās and personal ones, an example could be a duel between Tano and him with her letting out her emotions and frustrations about how she likes him but he doesnāt even look her way it would need to be unique and perhaps somewhat brutal with him accepting her feelings but denying her until she is older and understands why choosing him would make things harder for herself, with her fighting tooth and nail in an attempt to get how serious her feelings are across not knowing any better way too as Jedi arenāt supposed to follow such feelings and just genuine anxiety not knowing if or why heād ever consider her and if heād even wait for her. Iām not sure how well what Iāve put makes sense but I hope it at least gets my general idea across. Nice chapter!