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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and The Book

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Harry Potter and The Book

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Iceling
IcelingLv14Iceling

And I was right. This is a show Japan's might story. Don't bring in unmentioned countries into a HP fic, it ruins it.

7mth
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jhsilver
jhsilverLv12jhsilver

China, I think you missed the first paragraph, all though mind you I didn't bother reading after the first paragraph.

6mth
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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Yea, I'm not sure this is for me. I prefer proper fanfic with a change introduced and everything changes from there, not pre-existing changes that could be anything from minor plot changes to an entire new world that makes a novel basically a click bait about HP world. This chapter? Didn't like it, I want to read about the adventure of a character, the MC, all this? Stuff the MC doesn't know, I don't want to know, since its not part of his story and was boring.

9mth
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cyberlector_321
cyberlector_321Lv1cyberlector_321

agradezco el capitulo.

6mth
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