Rei444
Hmm. This has potential even if the english is shaky. I personally don't like the 2 personalities in one body sub-plot, it never reads comfortably. It'd be best to remove this "Naraku" from Great Sage.
I thought the story will be cringe but it's good...very good.I have a idea...Are You Willing To listen ?
Imma drop this if you don’ fix great sage
now thats this i oc is a she am out i hate yuri fanfic
E os outros poderes que ele pediu de outros animes e de rimuru. Ele não está explorando . E essa naraku Meh.
Thanks for the hard work
he had pain nullification how can he feel pain
First? Also can you not make a cliffhanger for such a scene?
Didn't expect the double chapter now didya?
