loskro
These... 10 last chapters have been an utter rollercoaster. I understand you are trying to portray your character the way you do, but having to truly put so much emphasis on exactly that feels... weird. It's like the story is on a filler arc without a sense of direction. -Don't get me wrong, I enjoy this fic, and it is one of three stories I am daily checking up on, but as of late, it has turned quite odd, almost like the story is de-railing itself from how it started and it's initial strong point of interest about pokemon, and not this... drama that has gone on these last chapters. -Still, looking forward for more. Keep it up, Author!