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Transmigrated Into Harry Potter World As Severus Snape For A Vacation

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Elokla
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thanks for the chapters so far and honestly it's good but I don't like how he breaks the fourth wall everytime he talks please mellow it down as we go on

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In his previous world, Edmund was an avid fan of the Deadpool character. Following his transmigration, he's emulating that persona as a means to alleviate stress and tension. However, you need not worry, for in the next chapters, his interactions with others will grow, and the frequency of this behavior will naturally diminish as he becomes more engaged in his daily life.

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JDLorelei
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Just another suggestion, if you struggle to translate from your home language to English, try using ChatGPT online to translate and add the proper grammar and punctuation where needed. I’ve done this before and I have to say it really makes a difference.

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_Solomon_
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I hope you can make Severus stronger in this as he has an AI next to him to analyse all spells and to the computing for arithmetic spells also

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