Comments of chapter undefined of The Genius Scientist in A Magic World

add some kingdom building

the chapter was good and vivid description of the surroundings that he awoke in was also good, keep up 👍

I like the ingenuity and grit that the MC showed in this chapter. It makes me curious of how he will adapt to his new situation. That said, I think establishing scene sequences, character realizations, and actions can need some improvement. Sequencing events can impact how relatable a character can be to readers, especially if it demonstrates their abilities.