Comments of chapter undefined of Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Bro is going to get bodied 😭 atticus just need to become advanced- and unlock his katana maybe another bloodline and he’s done even if he’s expert- , thanks for the chapter

This is an interesting story but the author needs to chill with the repetitive descriptions. This chapters first paragraph and final paragraph both were about spineas looking at Atticus and aruora streaking through the sky. Not my favorite but I get it. This chapter focused on the antagonist. But this is my main issue with how the author writes. The majority of this chapter boils down to “the protagonist beat up my (the antagonist) friends. That makes me mad. I’m extra mad because I told my friends to confront the protagonist so it’s my fault they got beat up. Grrrr I’m mad!” These couple of sentences then get rehashed and repeated into several paragraphs of filler word mush. There are so many sections of this story that go from good chapters with little to no fluff, to suddenly a chapter that was written by a student desperately trying to reach the minimum word count for their assignment. Author you have a genuinely interesting story but you have a bad habit for getting too wrapped up in overly explaining character motivations. I think this story would be greatly improved if you were able to dial it back a bit.

Nice chapter