RealmWeaver
A very good prologue. The description was on point, I was able to vividly imagine the action and the scenery. But the dialogue was a massive downfall because it didn't match the description of you painted.For example, you portrayed the alien as someone with experience and enlightenment but his dialogue was like a teenager and even his last declaration was just worse. This is what most cultivation novels suffer from, you will find a century-old cultivation action like a child. I hope you will take note of it and make the characters act according to the temperament you portrayed.
we know that you wanted to let us know that MC is op . but please no matter how op MC you are he can't destroy a civilization that has prosper don't know how long and how many planets do u think they had conquer it.this classic in Japan where's MC destroy the invading army on his own planet and go alone to destroy the enemy planet so that his world has peace is a b***t very very b**t