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I love this story and hope to see the completion. My only concern is that there are some mistakes that need to be address. Grammatical is one. Some paragraphs have missing words so it’s hard to understand what is actually being mentioned. Sometimes the names changes and I understand that can happen. But in this book (although not important) Doris’s name changed to Dorothy. Sometimes it happens to the main characters too. Other than that, this book is amazing and can’t wait to see how it will progress😍