Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Hegemon

I apologize, but I've decided to stop working on it. The writing and plot don't seem to meet my expectations and my new standards, and it feels like something a naive 12-year-old would write. Don't worry, in my new story, I've already decided to incorporate crime organization building in here, it's one of the many things I will include that would help the mc's rise to power. But the pacing is a bit slow, so it's going to be a long time before you'll see some exciting stuff.