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Comments of chapter undefined of Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

lelouch_7448
lelouch_7448Lv1lelouch_7448

I agree, it was a bit dark, him being a dragon warrior I understand along with the attack on Arendel, but the guy controlling people for his pleasure, for me, it would be a story about a guy exploring The Disney world doesn't need reincarnation or evil angels, just a journey of self-discovery, God needs him for something, if not even God can solve this something, how will the MC solve it?

Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

Because of the self imposed rules about non-interference which was like the main reason god asked him to become his go to man when someone needs to disappear or learn some lessons. He was basicly supposed to become gods hitman but in a more friendly relationship instead of cold work contract. And currently he should be on a training trip which is also kinda his payment for future work, he gets to have fun and train then he needs to go and "solve" some rebelious/arogant powerfull beings.

Thomas_Reaney
Thomas_ReaneyLv4Thomas_Reaney

nah don't do that I've seen so many fabrics do that and just end up scraping the whole thing altogether. just stick with the groove

signalchal_24
signalchal_24Lv4signalchal_24

Please don't, I picked this back up after I burned out and now i'm excited for this fight, I personally love overpowered or at least strong MC's since they don't rely on random power ups too much.

Yorgan
YorganLv12Yorgan

Funny thing, i had told to author don't go this way in the Discord, well he did't listen me.

Arthas_Pendragon
Arthas_PendragonLv3Arthas_Pendragon

I very much agree with your idea, in fact, I confess that it was very difficult for me to continue reading the fanfic after having a furry as a tigress in the harem, it just makes me cringe. Although I don't really agree with you doing it after the Hotel Transylvania arc, I think it would be better if you saved this idea for a better arc in a better world when you go to rewrite it since I loved the idea of reincarnated VS reincarnated, but I felt it was wasted on something like Hotel Transylvania

Anthony_Nguyen_0554
Anthony_Nguyen_0554Lv1Anthony_Nguyen_0554

No rewrite.

chaos02
chaos02Lv15chaos02

It sounds interesting but could you not erase this is still very good 😁

doug1998
doug1998Lv3doug1998

Sem reescrever

TLgamer_online
TLgamer_onlineLv4TLgamer_online

Do not do that that will be hard for you,ill suggest something,how about make a ark when the mc splited from them,

MrIsaac
MrIsaacLv1MrIsaac

no

Narutoss5
Narutoss5Lv12Narutoss5

No rewrite, please. He is overpowered for these low level worlds. Throw him into some higher level universes. The story will turn out fine.

Wendy_Perdomo
Wendy_PerdomoLv14Wendy_Perdomo

I'm in between because kind of like the dark path but it will be good to know a different path. So either is good. Just don't delete this version please.

RoxanGS
RoxanGSLv1RoxanGS

No rewrite

DaoistvqHHbZ
DaoistvqHHbZLv15DaoistvqHHbZ

Rewrite but i would like to keep the harem as is, as for the System a diffrent approach would be nice becours i think it is bearly present and it could offer more options like a Shop,Mission or Quests, or an exchange Market it is a Multivers who sad that Jin is the only one who has to works for god i mean a Multivers is huge one "Human " having to Deal with all those Universes is a bit hard isn't it ? As for if it is dark or not i don't care i can enjoy a good dark Story as well it can be be a good Story with a happy ending or a dark one with action an blood shed i can enjoy both kinds

Avy1753
Avy1753Lv3Avy1753

I agree to rewrite, MC got way too op. Things for immediately dark, and the romance are too much.

Gage_Renfro
Gage_RenfroLv14Gage_Renfro

no keep as is just lightly it up a bit here and there and add him having kids makes things more interesting

Florian_Ventre
Florian_VentreLv2Florian_Ventre

pas de ré écriture s il vous plait

joaquin_Romero
joaquin_RomeroLv1joaquin_Romero

No hagas eso lo que odio es que una historia se rescriba en algunos casos que da bien pero esperar asta que vuelva en el momento en el que te quedaste en la historia es horrible o que cambian demasiado la historia que parece otra diferente o directamente abandona la historia o pasan años asta que vuelva a escribir Si puede que este muy roto pero eso es lo que se espera cuando tiene un sistema ami megusta que este dominado y conquite pero si lo que quieres es que tenga un desafío mandalo a un mundo mas difisil como un video juego una serie como ben 10 mortal kombat Street Fighter Steven universe por ejemplo one piece jojo.s o si quiere algo mas difisil dc o marvel ay estan lleno de sugetos ridículamente fuerte o el mundo de saitama Ami me encanta mucho tu historia y me preocupa que con el reescrito la abandones o te agobies y densidad que la historia ya no vale la pena

Jonas_Luis
Jonas_LuisLv1Jonas_Luis

Reescreva. Apesar do começo ser interessante, a fic claramente se perdeu e ficou sem sal no último arco. Apoio totalmente a reescrita, até por que é para melhor afinal

Killian_Inacio
Killian_InacioLv2Killian_Inacio

no don't do that please 😅