SlimeSage
I agree, it was a bit dark, him being a dragon warrior I understand along with the attack on Arendel, but the guy controlling people for his pleasure, for me, it would be a story about a guy exploring The Disney world doesn't need reincarnation or evil angels, just a journey of self-discovery, God needs him for something, if not even God can solve this something, how will the MC solve it?
I very much agree with your idea, in fact, I confess that it was very difficult for me to continue reading the fanfic after having a furry as a tigress in the harem, it just makes me cringe. Although I don't really agree with you doing it after the Hotel Transylvania arc, I think it would be better if you saved this idea for a better arc in a better world when you go to rewrite it since I loved the idea of reincarnated VS reincarnated, but I felt it was wasted on something like Hotel Transylvania
Rewrite but i would like to keep the harem as is, as for the System a diffrent approach would be nice becours i think it is bearly present and it could offer more options like a Shop,Mission or Quests, or an exchange Market it is a Multivers who sad that Jin is the only one who has to works for god i mean a Multivers is huge one "Human " having to Deal with all those Universes is a bit hard isn't it ? As for if it is dark or not i don't care i can enjoy a good dark Story as well it can be be a good Story with a happy ending or a dark one with action an blood shed i can enjoy both kinds
No hagas eso lo que odio es que una historia se rescriba en algunos casos que da bien pero esperar asta que vuelva en el momento en el que te quedaste en la historia es horrible o que cambian demasiado la historia que parece otra diferente o directamente abandona la historia o pasan años asta que vuelva a escribir Si puede que este muy roto pero eso es lo que se espera cuando tiene un sistema ami megusta que este dominado y conquite pero si lo que quieres es que tenga un desafío mandalo a un mundo mas difisil como un video juego una serie como ben 10 mortal kombat Street Fighter Steven universe por ejemplo one piece jojo.s o si quiere algo mas difisil dc o marvel ay estan lleno de sugetos ridículamente fuerte o el mundo de saitama Ami me encanta mucho tu historia y me preocupa que con el reescrito la abandones o te agobies y densidad que la historia ya no vale la pena