Comments of chapter undefined of Resurgence of Twilight

I have only one thing to say.... This whole book/story is worth maybe 10-15 chapters total. I see almost everything repeated over and over and over again and it takes away the life of this thing. Now, I'm not saying this is bad cause it's actually good, very good. But I just don't think this was thought out to well and it kind of shows. Anyway I hope this gives you some feedback and criticism for future writing you may do.