Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Good work my man! Maybe for book 2 you could do a crossover with Dxd already in HP. Loved this, and having high hopes for your next work! Keep it up!

i loved your work since the very beggining and im happy you succeded in creating this book, i cant wait to see where you go with it now ( my suggestion would be RWBY in the next crossover because even tho he is very powerfull in the magic aspect i think he would also benefit from the hunter school,also it would be a fun idea for the coven to have their auras unlocked (also in another subject "MOMMY SALEM") )

nah I actually think this is a perfect ending. no need to add crossovers or anything imo. Love the fic and really like how it was a perfect mixture of crack fic with actual good plot.

I mean, if you want to blend the world it's okay. But i think the option to use system to as a tool still there y know *btw haven't read this chappy yet* In early stage we open the story with how gamer system capable of bringing to multiverse level, i the grind never end =w=) I think we could do and evolve the system to open more options for our MC. Cuz he finish the ACT/Book 1 of the journey in his grind =w=) I would suggest a multiverse bar, or capability of traveling it safely Or upgrading the system for our MC grind more than HP verse power level You could bring him DnD verse to update the system, or other verse to gain said system power Like nen, the force, ki, or even basic level mana the all tool magic energy And world blend is still an option too, i would like to see more of your work too =w=)9

Thank you bro for finishing the story

A world for the crossover would ideally be DC since the concept of magic in both worlds is very similar, unlike Marvel where only divine beings can do true magic, leaving mortals only sorcery (Google Translator)

Me encanta la novela, creo que si quieres continuar con la novela es haciendo cruzes a otros mundos, mi sugerencia es ir primero al mundo de dragón ball y pedir juventud eterna y la capacidad de adaptarse a cualquier mundo y sus poderes para el mc y sus cónyuges, también sería bueno tomar a bulma y unirla al aquelarre, luego puedes enviar al mc a otros mundos para aprender nuevos métodos de magia, ki , etc. Mi sugerencia en que valla a mundos donde puedas mejorar el control sobre la magia o donde haiga mujeres hermosas

Thanks author... Would love to see a few chapters on a few of the girls pregnant and then giving birth.

Thanks for the chap it was a good conclusion to the story!

good chapter keep it up

you're a good good person lol

Here's a funny idea; only as an "omake" that some of them ended up in the Pentakill III:Lost Chapter "Concert" event and that they recorded it and then realized that they were in a video game world

Marvel, GoT, no weird obscure anime that only a few know. they aren't as well known or liked as many their readers like to think.

thanks for the fic

Thanks for the chapter and the book

Can you make a sequel with going in other countries to learn their magic and something and a crossover with some other story

thanks for the story. For the crossover, i suggest stargate

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amazing story author