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Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Pranjal_Personal
Pranjal_PersonalLv4Pranjal_Personal

good story. looking forward to your next story

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Jack_Rybka
Jack_RybkaLv4Jack_Rybka

tftc. I like the idea of snippets, so you can post it in webnovel too. Hope you will write some fanfictions in marvel/one piece/dxd/DC/Warcraft/Naruto/HP fandoms some time in the future

Wolcrawler12
Wolcrawler12Lv14Wolcrawler12

What ruins this story for me are the yuri vibes. When I read a story that says it's a harem storie I want the girls to be there for the mc. Yuri has always been my biggest gripe as a harem fan. Like 90% of the harem stories always have yuri in them. What I feel when I see yuri in a harem storie is just a waste of space. First of all why even do you need the mc just pair all the girls with eachother and he can watch them in the corner like a true cuck. It's not hot or an intresting consept, it's just annoying.

Divine_Seraph
Divine_SeraphLv4Divine_Seraph

oh no... it is a grind- you must max the stats!

LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv4LeonardoDiCaprio1

good chapter keep it up

orangegummy
orangegummyLv12orangegummy

talk toomuch if I darklord I will use this to kill more

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Comic01
Comic01Lv3Comic01

The introduction of Operation R.E.V.O.L.U.T.I.O.N. sounds like something out of Kids Next Door

Tyrant_Wild_Snail
Tyrant_Wild_SnailLv13Tyrant_Wild_Snail

Thanks for the chapter !

Mysticwolf
MysticwolfLv5Mysticwolf

author could do a ff DxD ff where the mc is one of the eight demon sorcerer the dragon demon shendu after his soul collides with a fresh soul that died in a tragic car accident 🤔

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

TFTC!!!

Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4Jama1810

TYSMFTC

Lokordome
LokordomeLv12Lokordome

Thank you for the Chapter! This was great. Thank you for bringing to life this world. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for anything else you write. See you in the next one.

Jake_Anderson
Jake_AndersonLv4Jake_Anderson

MOAR!! Please 🙏

Wellington_Lucas
Wellington_LucasLv4Wellington_Lucas

Obrigado pelo capítulo incrível, Autor-San!!😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Power Stone...

Lyson
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Wander
WanderLv14Wander

Thanks for the chapter

EnragedKing
EnragedKingLv15EnragedKing

Thank you for the chapters

OverkillBills
OverkillBillsLv5OverkillBills

Thx

CrimsonN7
CrimsonN7Lv11CrimsonN7

Looking forward to more