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Comments of chapter undefined of Revenge System_X

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Daoistzp9FIX
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respect the walk away

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Yorbin
YorbinLv12Yorbin

When I started writing my own stories, I always wanted to introduce the background story and quickly get to the main point, which is why I understand the reason for this novel's quick pace. However, it took me a while to fully understand the benefits of really nailing down a backstory. It's too late to change it now, but maybe in the future if you want to do something similar, I suggest to take your time writing the backstory. Go through the emotions, changes, growth and setbacks so that it can be appreciate a lot more when the MC finally starts getting his revenge, payback, etc.

Snow_Fox18
Snow_Fox18Lv1Snow_Fox18

The pacing feels a bit fast, writing style is good but a little... Emotionless I guess?? Not that it's bad but it's just lacking in detail and feel that gets you into the characters and immersed in the story but so far the first cp is good