Comments of chapter undefined of the monarch

I like the story so far, I think some plot developments are weird though, he miraculously recovered but it seems nobody has made any fuss about it, its kind of strange. Another thing is the fights can be more interesting if you add more creative ways that people can use mana. I think that will also help you enjoy writing fights too. I don’t know if you’ve read Hunter x, but in my opinion that manga has some of the best fighting sequences ever written in fantasy, just saying it cause u might be able to draw inspiration from it. Keep going, practice makes perfect.