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Dunno, I don't like mc... Feels too childish to me... The whole rob thing and wishes and parents blessings feels like a story coaxing children..
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I like how God and MC's coversation goes.
Please don't stretch the story beyond It’s current events such as Luffy is on Egghead and Garp is Captured by Blackbeard pirates.
I confess I'm disappointed that the MC won't have a golden finger.
if mmc is just wannabe hero and save people everywhere he goes...if so I will drop it... but I will read it to see what it holds.
Probably some of the best first two chapters in a reincarnation trope fan fiction I have read so far. Good job.
really good and refreshing start. im depressed from all the other dark themed fanfics. good change for my daily life
Very solid dialogue. It felt very realistic
hmm, let's see how this goes. hope the tags weren't bait
I thank you for the chapter
Tnx for the chapter
