Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach: Echoes of the Spirit.
Bleach: Echoes of the Spirit.
KindaWeirdChampBro
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i have some ideas for the abilities of his sword if u didn't decide yet. I was think about something like copying other swords abilities and can use them all at the same time, for an example his shikai can copy other shikai abilities and his bankai can use the bankai of said copy, you can enhance and perfect the idea, u should put some limit to the numbers of sword he can copies, some condition to copy, like seeing them or clashing with them. at the end it's just a suggestion. what do u think about it.
Ah, before I forget it. I'm not just creating OC's for no reason, each of these characters I introduce during Hideki's academy days will have relevance later on the story. When reading Bleach, I always realized that, even though we knew all the Lieutenants and Captains, we barely had ANY information, not even names or looks about most of the Third Seats or lower. You notice when the TYBW started, Kubo began introducing some lower seated characters from each squad? I think he realized during a war, more people should be involved, but at that point in the story, it felt a little artificial to introduce them just to get killed off. So... With that in mind, I'm creating a few OC's of my own. Each with their strengths and weakness, to, hopefully, make the ranks of the Gotei 13 feel more alive.
Nice to see you back and writing again. You're a great writer that makes interesting characters with a knack for small details that builds upon the world. It's only been 3 chapters but we get a feel of the characters that have been introduced sans Rangiku but shes had minimal screen time and internal thoughts. As long as you continue I know you'll make a great story.
