Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto-Legendary Harem of The Hidden Leaf
Naruto-Legendary Harem of The Hidden Leaf
Yuri_Lover23
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MISTER_GfLv1MISTER_Gf
At this point in the story, how important is the MC? Since even though he has two very strong abilities he doesn't change anything in the story, whether he is in the world or not, he doesn't make
MISTER_GfLv1MISTER_Gf
It's okay author, I think I was also a little wrong in my criticism, since clearly the focus of the story is relationships. Anyway, it's just my opinion, if you went deeper the story would be a thousand times better than it already is.
Yuri_Lover23:One thing i have liked about writing these stories is that while the main focus and the point of bringing you all in is the smut, its the fact that you guys are invested in the plot and world-building. Invested enough to have a complaint or observation like this. And I will admit; this is one of my major flaws. I create a powerful character that doesn’t have any significant to the story or the canon. I am conditioned, when it comes to fanfics, to write along the actual canon plot. I don’t typically change anything major via the OCs actions, you know? That is on me. Usually, I would shrug it off and say “that’s not the point of the story” and if its not, why make the character as powerful as he is? Why not make him average? Well, I don’t know. Its a bad habit of mine, I apologize
