BIG_BAD_WOLF2000
just finished my binge read of this beautiful novel; now its time for a mini review! For a novel with only 20 odd chapters, a lot has happened since chapter one. However, that isn't always a bad thing. The Grammer is well done and so is just about everything else. Only real complaints is that 1, the punctuation etc could use a tad bit of work in the early chapters. 2, i wish the chapters were just a bit longer. Otherwise, the novel is fantastic. Can't wait for more and keep up the amazing work!
Off topic question but in this narrative due things like mindflayers and other aberrations exist because I just find the idea of the mc or some other demon lord breaking into a world only to get blindsided by the fact that it’s been taken over by mindflayers and being forced to deal with the counter invasion hilarious due to how overpowered the abilities mindflayers have.