Comments of chapter undefined of Halo: Gravemind’s Survival Guide In Warhammer 40K
Halo: Gravemind’s Survival Guide In Warhammer 40K
Demonic_Kaiser
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I pulled out my A-game for =this chapter's descriptions, good lord the descriptions take longer than actually writing this chapter! How do you feel about it? Should I be more casual with descriptions, or double down?
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strong descriptions are fine and I don't mind that at all its when it gets to ridiculous levels and there is more descriptions and no plot/advancement. An example of ridiculous levels would be Shinigami of the Marvel World. It was almost trolling/sarcastic levels of descriptions and unnecessary words.
Demonic_Kaiser:I’ll take that into consideration; but fair warning, this fanfic will generally have strong descriptions, unlike most webnovels where things are glossed over in two sentences. My wsih for this fanfic is that it can be a hybrid between webnovel’s fast paced style, and Warhammer’s atmospheric storytelling. This might not be entertaining to people looking for a quick binge, but I am not really doing this out of an obligation to meet standards or deadlines.
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