I pulled out my A-game for =this chapter's descriptions, good lord the descriptions take longer than actually writing this chapter! How do you feel about it? Should I be more casual with descriptions, or double down?
Please more casual. It gets too long winded and annoying to read like in the first 5 paragraphs. You're not really telling any important information except a few key details and the rest is just fluff that is filling up the paragraphs and i just start skimming.
I should have had that mentality before, besides, your anger is useless if you are weak against someone so strong that they can crush you or torture you for fun, the humiliation will only be worse