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Comments of chapter undefined of Choice and Lottery system

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Yack6
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It looks very summarized as if it were a brief description of what happened, without dialogues, with small jumps between scenes quickly...

sureshmungay
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thanks I will try my best to do it iam not good at this writing stuff as i started writing only a month ago.

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Shadow5789
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Nice đŸ‘đŸ»