Reda_Ouerkat
It’s good, but maybe you have to put more effort on the details, explain more about the mc
Thank you for your comment. For the sake of speed, you can consider these chapters as just the beginning of the history of the story. The main events will begin in the coming chapters.
Did you make this with Chatgpt? It has that odd disassociated vibe the Ai tends to use in the writing style.