Cedric_7512
Good story. But. All pov - useless. All of them. Why author think that repeat from other views is interesting? Better give mo story update. And than, if you have some time when story end write the pov between chapters. Next . When his sin will be max affect for his emotions - he will dismiss his squad. For what reason add them? Why mc don't train his own skills? He save elia? Great. Awesome. Why he didn't save raela, ashara? He can't find some ppl who looks like them and pay them?... And send them to dorn stealthy .+1ally. So many possibilities but he didn't do anything. Almost.
I was just thinking, when the common people hear word of this, will any people looking for a place away from corrupt nobility think of escanore's land as an option? (The ones who heard the full story that is.) Would be nice to see a bigger pov of what the population/nobility will think of escanore... and that painting.