Comments of chapter undefined of HP - Thomas Lamorak
HP - Thomas Lamorak
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Yeah this is a dr op... A rand om all pow erful OC who just hap pens to be bet ter than Dumbledore and MC going full ret ard mode for the sake of meaning less dra ma. Ima gine being nearly cor rupted when standing away from it and then deci ding that the very best thing he can do is NOT get the F away from it and get Dumbledore but ins tead pick it up. Even wor se is the fact that the en tire ori gin story seems to have been for gotten. The rit uals that crea ted his body li teral had a copy of the Diadem as part of it and some how it has no effects on his will power or mind and hes some how wea ker than Harry with a lite ral soul pie ce in his head. And that's not even men tioning about the pho enix in side of him lol...
Im sorry you feel like that. The OC (Alan Knott), is indeed immensely powerful, and for a very good reason, I have already planned out who he is, and why he is how he is. But that will come much later in the story after Hogwarts timeline why he is that powerful. Also, I personally disliked the fact that destorying something so dark and powerful as a Horcrux was always so easy, a bit of fire, or a magical sword and thats that. Nothing else, no consequences or anything. And the very reason he did not just let it go, was the compulsion charms that were put on it. That combined with the dark nature of it, and its original purpose to affect the mind made it very dangerous to be near. And yes he MC does have a version of the very same in him, and no the ritual isn't forgotten. I wont say much, but remember the the blue dots? They are connected with that. Along with the Phoenix soul that reside in him. I hope that clears up some things.
man i hated this types where authors would just kill off a pet right off the bat. at least make felix live for years before killing him. All those things you writing about how the MC would raise him and would die just after 2 chapters. Like dont bother creating another pet character. This was bad writing, and you know it.
