Comments of chapter undefined of Chimerical World System

Chimerical World System

Han_Sirang

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Philip_Ball_2567Lv3Philip_Ball_2567

A great start to this story. This has as good a rthym as Tolkien's writing's. plus this is enjoyable to read.

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Han_SirangAuthorHan_Sirang

Thank you so much for the kind words! I will continue to do my best.

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Love the concept and characters! I think perhaps boxing in the statuses, tasks and similar would add to it feeling even more like a game and make it easier to distinguish between descriptive story and the tasks/ quests.

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