Comments of chapter undefined of Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter. I think it would be cool if he tells with his inner voice that he is stronger than Sazex, so that his girls know about it.

Well, this is the first time I've read an inner voice fanfic and although the Chinese writing style is a bit annoying, it's not very serious and I would recommend that you make the heroines stronger and not depend so much on your mc, it's annoying to see female characters with so much potential just be fawning spectators so I hope you make them better later on for now I'll keep reading and giving you power stones

Why did he have to intervene? let them breathe, grow. Now the heroines are the ones with problems on their minds. It's okay that they are in a relationship but for him to intervene even in a battle that they can easily win, you can see how controlling the author is and his zero experience in relationships.

When Raynare was killed, I was curious about the post-event handling at the political level in the canon story. I mean, in this capter, if Rias wasn't smart, I don't know why Sona didn't tell Raynare the political threat

Thanks for the Chapter.

Tftc

thanks for the chapter

Good chapter.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter sensei and in a certain way there are many characters in dxd wasted potential and more but well what can be done I like your story since you correct those errors and give them the potential they had

Nice

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thx4chap

good job in the chapter dog author

thanks for the chapter 😊