DogLickerGods
You should put a ranking system for the rewards, that way it won't be so random. please decrease the use of Chinese expressions. Most of them are cartoonish, intended for use in theatrical plays with comedic intent. Its use, too much and irregular, takes away the immersion of the story, I know it's just a mashup, but it's good reading material, for entertainment, which I don't want to see the end of. Thanks for chapter!
Severe downer seeing the Sharingan show up immediately. Can't say how many stories immediately had people making up stories just to have some random method give them the Sharingan asap. Not a fan of the term golden finger either. Don't know where that term came from. Only know it from a silly mecha anime. Don't remember Rito being.. well being Issei. Who I can't stand and wish more DxD fanfics would just make their own MC instead of using him. Been a loooooong time but I remember him being decent but with the lucky pervert affliction. His inner monolog made no sense at all going by the thoughts he was having just before unless he knew she would hear what he was saying. The start up and his initial thoughts are out of sync otherwise. Her attempted response should also have been obvious enough to clue him in right away she heard him. Even without the clue that doing it right away because the two are next to him.