Comments of chapter undefined of Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
mythoast
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author, his story and writing are incredible, however the fatal flaw in his novel made him lose a lot of the final quality of the novel. Ex the only constant thing in the protagonist's life was total focus on just basketball and there was no development of the story in other aspects of the protagonist's life he had no desires or hobbies there were no likes or dislikes, no unexpected developments eg: the protagonist's brother trying to kill him with the brotherhood being just an act, however there was just basketball and following the story and defeating Kuroko's squad in basketball, not that this is ruin but it is that in the end there was no development of the backstory as well as the protagonist's daily life, etc.
dear author, I have complete support for your new endeavor but can you change the title? IMO having so many books under the same name might be confusing for other readers like me. Maybe try changing it to a more domineering title? something that makes the mc of the fanfic more interesting than the rest. "The conqueror" as a title in your new fanfic is kinda bland and not domineering enough to spur interest in reading. IMO an hxh fanfic where battles are always the highlights, a title that can evoke a sense of bloodthirstiness or invincibility, would better fit the whole world background. though this is just my take, I sure hope for your new fanfic to garner much support from readers alike. And as usual keep up the good work, I will support your every book holistically since i cannot support you economically.
