mythoast
lol seems like the author is a fan of kise, by making him reach in the zone while physically drain is already bs. and now you made him overpowered the mc in that kind of state? so whats next man? dont tell us your mc needs to open his zone just to stop a physically drain kise in last minute?i know not only me but many readers will be disappointed in this chapter.
The fact that Kise was faster than tsuna who could handle Aomine in the zone and stronger than him who was almost as strong as Murasakibara, even after the entire game and entering perfect copy twice.... Author, your mc was portrayed as this strong guy who could toy with the GoM, yet seeing him like this right now just crushes completely the impression we have of him. I don't imagine what you're planning to do for the rakuzan if this is the way you want to protray him. But please keep in mind that what I liked the fact that Tsuna was "putting them in their place". You've built this invincible persona that is hard to find in this chapter. It might seem like just one chapter but the impact is still there (as seen in the comments). Regardless this is just one negative that doesn't negate all the positives of this fanfiction. I've liked reading it and look forward to reading the rest of it. Good luck mate